well, here's the online version....
http://www.ipetitions.com/petition/sgk-health-insurance-turkey/?utm_medium=social&utm_source=facebook&utm_campaign=buttonsorry, I'm not being a total snob here, but spelling, paragraph spacing, grammar and punctuation should have been checked and double checked for something that's supposed to make officials take notice. I'm not saying this to be pedantic but it should be of a certain standard to be taken seriously. I lost interest half way through and have a sneaky feeling the receiver will too.
I feel too that the last sentence isn't going to make it look as though they're people who feel at one with the nation they've chosen to live with :
''we see it as another way to make money from people who haven't got it contrary to Turkish belief''
Although I'm not a big fan of the petitioning idea I am happy to offer my services if they want a proof reader for anything else.
And again, honestly I'm not being difficult over this, but they will fail before they start if it's not done properly.